Clash double page spread language analysis
The dps that we analysed the language on was taken from Clash magazine and is called 'baddies'. The language is formal but has some slang and uses contracted words such a didn't, can't, we're and a few more through out. It has alliteration in the first line of the article it says 'Ladies and Gentlemen welcome to the wired, wired world of baddies.' this adds interest to the beginning of the article as it first of all invites the reader to read the article, and then the reader feel included in the article. The article uses lots of grammar and punctuation such as commas, full stops and quotation marks. It has quotations that have swear words in it but they are almost complimented by big words such … “I can't overstate the amount of ribbing and piss-taking that goes on in the band. We'd be great caricatures.”
An image is needed here and you need to explain your choice of language and register for your own pages. Also, be careful with your grammar! Capital G for grammar - why? Clash magazine - should be a capital . Come on girls these are very basic errors and you will lose communication marks.
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